Hilary Rota

delish let's do it

A deliciously-plotted copy review for service pros ready to let their genius take the mic

Draft

the first

You're not bad at writing. 

you're just too close to your own offers to know what's working, what need's zhuzhing, and what's gotta go. 

let's do it

The First Draft is a love-coded, sales-focused copy review for when your message feels flat, 
but you know your offer’s got the juice. 

I'll run a fine-tooth comb through
your existing copy and hand you: 

messaging refinement to ensure your point lands

section revisions to maximize flow and readability 

Light roasts where needed so you feel confident pressing send 

investment 
$222 cad

A 30-MINUTE GOOGLE MEET WALKTHROUGH TO ENSURE CLARITY AND COHESION 

 3–5 CORE MESSAGING TAKEAWAYS TO KEEP YOUR VOICE CONSISTENT ACROSS PLATFORMS

A MINI ROADMAP WITH KEY REWRITES + STRUCTURE SUGGESTIONS

A FULL ANNOTATED GOOGLE DOC AUDIT OF ONE WEB PAGE (UP TO ~1,000 WORDS)

deliverables

TAKE THE NEXT STEP

YOU’VE DIY’D YOUR COPY AND IT’S FINE, BUT NOT CONVERTING

YOU KEEP TWEAKING, REWRITING, OR AVOIDING IT ALTOGETHER

YOU’RE LAUNCHING (OR RELAUNCHING) AND WANT A SANITY-SAVING SECOND SET OF EYES

YOU’RE CRAVING CLARITY, VALIDATION, AND SALES-ALIGNED FEEDBACK WITHOUT BOOKING A FULL REWRITE

HEY, MIDNIGHT SPIRAL.... 
THAT YOU?

let's connect

1. FILL OUT THE SHORT INTAKE FORM

2. SUBMIT YOUR COPY (HOMEPAGE, SALES PAGE, OR SERVICE PAGE)

3. I REVIEW, ANNOTATE, AND SEND YOUR DOC BACK WITHIN 5 BIZ DAYS

4. WE HOP ON A 30-MIN WALKTHROUGH CALL

5. YOU LEAVE WITH EDITS, CLARITY, AND CONFIDENCE


MY WEEKLY-ISH NEWSLETTER FOR OUTSIDE-THE-BOX STRATEGY, WRITING INSPO, AND THE OCCASIONAL OVERSHARE FROM SOMEONE WHO SHOULD PROBABLY GET MORE SUNLIGHT. (IT’S ME.)

JOIN COPY HOUR

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