You're not bad at writing.
You're just too close to your own offers to know what's working, what need's zhuzhing, and what's gotta go.
The First Draft is a love-coded, sales-focused copy review for when your message feels flat,
but you know your offer’s got the juice.
I'll run a fine-tooth comb through
your existing copy and hand you:
✺Messaging refinement to ensure your point lands
✺Section revisions to maximize flow and readability
✺Light roasts where needed so you feel confident pressing send
You've poured your heart into your offers. But trying to put it into words has you pulling out your hair and furiously trying to get chat to say it how you mean it.
Maybe you’re gearing up for a launch (or a relaunch) and you’d give anything for a sanity-saving second set of eyes—someone who can help you see what’s working, what’s not, and why.
What you’re really craving is proper articulation, validation, and strategic feedback that helps your copy sell—without the time, pressure, or price tag of a full rewrite.
The First Draft includes:
1. FILL OUT THE SHORT INTAKE FORM
2. SUBMIT YOUR COPY (HOMEPAGE, SALES PAGE, OR SERVICE PAGE)
3. I REVIEW, ANNOTATE, AND SEND YOUR DOC BACK WITHIN 5 BIZ DAYS
4. WE HOP ON A 30-MIN WALKTHROUGH CALL
5. YOU LEAVE WITH EDITS, CLARITY, AND CONFIDENCE
A FULL ANNOTATED GOOGLE DOC AUDIT OF ONE WEB PAGE (UP TO ~1,000 WORDS)
A 30-MINUTE GOOGLE MEET WALKTHROUGH TO ENSURE CLARITY AND COHESION
3–5 CORE MESSAGING TAKEAWAYS TO KEEP YOUR VOICE CONSISTENT ACROSS PLATFORMS
A MINI ROADMAP WITH KEY REWRITES + STRUCTURE SUGGESTIONS
investment starting at
$222 cad